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How to End Your College Essay Without Ruining It: A Guide for Students Who Are So Done
Struggling to end your college admissions essay? You’re not alone. Learn how to craft a confident, authentic conclusion—with real examples that actually work.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jan 83 min read


Admissions Officers, What’s Your Most Surprising Read? - A Candid Q&A on the Essays That Stand Out—for All the Right Reasons
The most unforgettable college essays aren’t about extraordinary achievements—they’re about ordinary moments made meaningful. From fixing a broken vending machine to folding laundry with a grandparent, surprising essays stand out because they reveal curiosity, reflection, and a voice that feels unmistakably real. When students stop performing and start noticing the small stories that shape who they are, their essays truly resonate.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Dec 16, 20253 min read


Your Guide to Crafting a Unique College Application Essay
College application essays shouldn't be cliché! Stop writing about "The Big Game" and "The Mission Trip." Discover the 5 exhausted topics admissions officers are sick of—and get the 5 fresh, unique angles that will actually make your story stand out. Ditch the generic. Write your acceptance.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Oct 16, 20254 min read


How to Write About Failure in Your College Essay: Reframing Low GPA, Mental Health, and Conduct Issues for Admissions Strategy
Writing about sensitive failures—like a GPA drop, disciplinary issue, or time lost to a mental health crisis—requires a careful admissions strategy. These challenges don’t just show resilience; they reveal your stability, self-advocacy, and emotional maturity. Use structure and framing to turn setbacks into clear evidence of growth.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Oct 10, 20256 min read


The "Why Us?" Essay: Moving Beyond Wikipedia
The "Why Us?" essay is the college admissions office's ultimate litmus test. They want to know if you'll actually enroll, thrive, and contribute. But too many students fall into the same trap: writing a glowing, generic summary of the college's website. If you just copy-paste facts about a beautiful campus or a high ranking, you sound like a robot reading a Wikipedia entry.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Oct 7, 20253 min read


Just When I Thought It Was Over: The Supplemental Essay Dash Began
Frustrated parent discovering supplemental essay requirements. As a parent, I thought we had crossed the finish line in the marathon that...
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jul 16, 20254 min read


Tips for Writing a Winning Common Application Essay
The Common Application essay is a crucial component of your college application. It is your chance to express who you are beyond your...
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jul 15, 20253 min read


10 Engaging Hooks to Make Your College Admissions Essay Shine and Get Noticed
Research shows that admissions officers often read hundreds of essays, so a great hook makes all the difference. It can be the dividing line between a quickly forgotten essay and one that stands out vividly in the minds of the admissions committee.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jun 10, 20254 min read


Breaking Down the Common Application Essay for Success
The Common Application essay is one of the most critical components of the college application process. It gives students a unique...
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jun 2, 20254 min read


Top Tips for Selecting the Ideal Common Application Essay Topic
Choosing a topic that feels authentic to you is crucial. Admissions officers want to hear your voice and understand your thoughts and feelings.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
May 4, 20255 min read


Using AI to Write Your College Admissions Essay
AI. It used to be the stuff of science fiction movies, but it has finally made it into mainstream American culture. How many of you have...
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Jun 11, 20235 min read


Not So Uncommon Essay Mistakes
Student writing an essay. As college admissions consultants, we read countless essays. Many of them are amazing. Others contain mistakes...
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Dec 10, 20212 min read
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