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How to Write About Failure in Your College Essay: Reframing Low GPA, Mental Health, and Conduct Issues for Admissions Strategy
Writing about sensitive failures—like a GPA drop, disciplinary issue, or time lost to a mental health crisis—requires a careful admissions strategy. These challenges don’t just show resilience; they reveal your stability, self-advocacy, and emotional maturity. Use structure and framing to turn setbacks into clear evidence of growth.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Oct 106 min read
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The "Why Us?" Essay: Moving Beyond Wikipedia
The "Why Us?" essay is the college admissions office's ultimate litmus test. They want to know if you'll actually enroll, thrive, and contribute. But too many students fall into the same trap: writing a glowing, generic summary of the college's website. If you just copy-paste facts about a beautiful campus or a high ranking, you sound like a robot reading a Wikipedia entry.
Kate-Jen Barker-Schlegel
Oct 73 min read
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